Using this photo, create your own short story with a main character and a description of a setting. You can write your story on paper or you can post it on the blog.
It was a sunny day with a powerful sun in my face . I was cycling down the park I could smell the fresh grass being cut . The trees were swaying like there was music playing . I cycled like the wind all the way to the bottom and scraped my knee . I shouted for help but no one was there.....
One day there was a lonely man who likes going to ride his shiny crimson red bike on hot sunny days in the open country side with several fields of long and short grass. He came to the end of the road and there was only two ways to go either left or right she didn't know where to go suddenly there were flash images zooming through his mind he just couldn't recognise the hole...
Description of the settIng The countryside is as hot as a volcano. The road is dirty as a car that has never had a wash. The trees are green as moss.The sky is blue as the sea.The grass is as pointy as a dagger.
Bob the most spoilt boy alive
There once lived a boy that was so spoiled he always got what he wanted but once that all changed.Bob was going to go camping.
Bob leaped into the Ferrari.His rich Parents forgot to bring any thing,but they only remembered to bring the Ferrari keys.The car revved the engine and then drove as fast a the speed of light.
2 hours later they finaly got to the camping site in the middle of the countryside.They remembered that they forgot everything.The parrents thought that they didn't want a greedy child,so they told him to go out the car and try and make a fire to cook animals. Bob thought that he was going to eat a delicacy.The parents went in the Ferrari and went home without their ungrateful son.
I quickly got onto my bike and cycled through the sun it was such a lovely day it felt like so relaxing sitting on my bike on such a quiet day. There was only a few miles then after that I would stop for some ice cream that is the best part of the journey for me until I got home and had a hot shower with hot chocolate.
The gate creaked open, and two 11 year old boys entered the dark, haunted park. Mark and Tom were forbidden to enter the park but the two boys paid no attention to their parents. Mark led the way and sat on the nearest bench which was surrounded with tall trees. Suddenly the leaves began to rustle, the ground began to shake and two slightly green hands grabbed them by their tops and lifted them slowly. They both screamed for their lives kicking and waving frantically. Laughter echoed around the park...
The school bell rang and everyone rushed outside for a break. “Have you heard the news?”Bob asked. “Yeah, Disneyland has had its first birthday!”Jim answered. “No.”Bob said, “the one when the two boys entered the ‘haunted’ park” “Not that part.”Jim admitted. That day after school the two boys left school together. Bob stopped in his tracks and stared at the haunted park. Jim carried on going. “So how m...” Jim turned around cautiously, and saw Bob opening up the gate. He jogged towards Bob to warn him but it was too late, he was making his way up the path. Jim knew he had no choice but to enter the park too. His trembling hands reached to open the gate. He raced up the path and jogged next to Bob. This isn’t a good idea Jim warned. “I’ll be fine” Bob replied and sprinted towards the bench surrounded with trees, the very same bench Mark and Tom sat down on. Jim went to join him. Very cautiously he sat down.
The leaves began to rustle, the ground began to shake and light green hands lifted them by the neck. Jim looked up and bit the hand that was holding him. Green blood flooded down and threw the boys down to the ground. They ran past the gate and straight back home.
I love it Gursiman. I think I need to give you 2 stars and a wish. So your star is that you have used dialogue, description and action you used show not tell.Your wish is power of three.
On a lovely summer morning, Jim, who lived in the countryside, had decided to go out cycling. "You must eat your breakfast or you will have no energy,” exclaimed his mum. Jim obediently ate his delicious breakfast, pumped his tyres with air and set out for cycling on his two wheeled blue bike. He waved goodbye and promised he would be back by lunch. Jim cycled carefully because the road was uneven. As he cycled, he could smell the fresh air. He could see the towering trees above him and green, luscious grass surrounding him. " What a wonderful day,” uttered Jim and added, “It looks like paradise.” He slowly stopped his bicycle to a halt and collected beautiful flowers for his mother.
While Jim was looking up at the sky, he wasn’t looking where he was going. He drove his bike accidentally on a big stone and fell on the hard, lopsided path. “Ouch!” Jim remarked. Blood oozed on the path and Jim tried to get up. He limped cautiously towards his bike and tried to drag it home, but he couldn’t. Luckily, Jim could just make out the outline of a man riding towards his punctured bike. When the man scanned Jim’s knee, he realized that Jim had been badly injured. The kind man offered help and said gently, “I can ride you home if you like.” “Thank you,” replied Jim smilingly.
As they reached home, Jim’s mum invited the man and gave him a welcoming hug. To Jim’s surprise, he was his distant uncle.
It was a sunny day with a powerful sun in my face . I was cycling down the park I could smell the fresh grass being cut . The trees were swaying like there was music playing . I cycled like the wind all the way to the bottom and scraped my knee . I shouted for help but no one was there.....
ReplyDeleteOne day there was a lonely man who likes going to ride his shiny crimson red bike on hot sunny days in the open country side with several fields of long and short grass. He came to the end of the road and there was only two ways to go either left or right she didn't know where to go suddenly there were flash images zooming through his mind he just couldn't recognise the hole...
ReplyDeleteDescription of the settIng
ReplyDeleteThe countryside is as hot as a volcano. The road is dirty as a car that has never had a wash. The trees are green as moss.The sky is blue as the sea.The grass is as pointy as a dagger.
Bob the most spoilt boy alive
There once lived a boy that was so spoiled he always got what he wanted but once that all changed.Bob was going to go camping.
Bob leaped into the Ferrari.His rich Parents forgot to bring any thing,but they only remembered to bring the Ferrari keys.The car revved the engine and then drove as fast a the speed of light.
2 hours later they finaly got to the camping site in the middle of the countryside.They remembered that they forgot everything.The parrents thought that they didn't want a greedy child,so they told him to go out the car and try and make a fire to cook animals. Bob thought that he was going to eat a delicacy.The parents went in the Ferrari and went home without their ungrateful son.
The END
I quickly got onto my bike and cycled through the sun it was such a lovely day it felt like so relaxing sitting on my bike on such a quiet day. There was only a few miles then after that I would stop for some ice cream that is the best part of the journey for me until I got home and had a hot shower with hot chocolate.
ReplyDeleteThe Haunted Park
ReplyDeleteThe gate creaked open, and two 11 year old boys entered the dark, haunted park. Mark and Tom were forbidden to enter the park but the two boys paid no attention to their parents. Mark led the way and sat on the nearest bench which was surrounded with tall trees. Suddenly the leaves began to rustle, the ground began to shake and two slightly green hands grabbed them by their tops and lifted them slowly. They both screamed for their lives kicking and waving frantically. Laughter echoed around the park...
The school bell rang and everyone rushed outside for a break.
“Have you heard the news?”Bob asked.
“Yeah, Disneyland has had its first birthday!”Jim answered.
“No.”Bob said, “the one when the two boys entered the ‘haunted’ park”
“Not that part.”Jim admitted.
That day after school the two boys left school together. Bob stopped in his tracks and stared at the haunted park. Jim carried on going.
“So how m...” Jim turned around cautiously, and saw Bob opening up the gate. He jogged towards Bob to warn him but it was too late, he was making his way up the path. Jim knew he had no choice but to enter the park too. His trembling hands reached to open the gate. He raced up the path and jogged next to Bob. This isn’t a good idea Jim warned.
“I’ll be fine” Bob replied and sprinted towards the bench surrounded with trees, the very same bench Mark and Tom sat down on. Jim went to join him. Very cautiously he sat down.
The leaves began to rustle, the ground began to shake and light green hands lifted them by the neck. Jim looked up and bit the hand that was holding him. Green blood flooded down and threw the boys down to the ground. They ran past the gate and straight back home.
THE END
I love it Gursiman. I think I need to give you 2 stars and a wish.
DeleteSo your star is that you have used dialogue, description and action you used show not tell.Your wish is power of three.
On a lovely summer morning, Jim, who lived in the countryside, had decided to go out cycling.
ReplyDelete"You must eat your breakfast or you will have no energy,” exclaimed his mum.
Jim obediently ate his delicious breakfast, pumped his tyres with air and set out for cycling on his two wheeled blue bike. He waved goodbye and promised he would be back by lunch. Jim cycled carefully because the road was uneven. As he cycled, he could smell the fresh air. He could see the towering trees above him and green, luscious grass surrounding him. "
What a wonderful day,” uttered Jim and added, “It looks like paradise.”
He slowly stopped his bicycle to a halt and collected beautiful flowers for his mother.
While Jim was looking up at the sky, he wasn’t looking where he was going. He drove his bike accidentally on a big stone and fell on the hard, lopsided path.
“Ouch!” Jim remarked.
Blood oozed on the path and Jim tried to get up. He limped cautiously towards his bike and tried to drag it home, but he couldn’t. Luckily, Jim could just make out the outline of a man riding towards his punctured bike. When the man scanned Jim’s knee, he realized that Jim had been badly injured. The kind man offered help and said gently, “I can ride you home if you like.”
“Thank you,” replied Jim smilingly.
As they reached home, Jim’s mum invited the man and gave him a welcoming hug. To Jim’s surprise, he was his distant uncle.