My favourite paragraph is the first one.I like the first one because it doesn't exactley tell us that Zelda is scared.But it gives a little hint saying that "Zelda shivered, where could she escape in the down pour?" I also like the way that there is a bit of a cliffhanger at the end of every paragraph.
I really like the part when Zelda ducks under the lorry. To make it even better the engine is hot .That is so tense. That not my favourite. My favourite has to be the part when Zelda is safe for the no. The author must of thought about that carefully. By Amari
I really like the part when she ducks under the lorry hiding from the rain Cat but to make it even more better the engine is hot that is tense. The author must of thought carefully about that. That's not my favourite part, it has to be the ending when it said she is safe for now I really want to now what's going to happen next.
My favourite paragraph is the first one.I like the first one because it doesn't exactley tell us that Zelda is scared.But it gives a little hint saying that "Zelda shivered, where could she escape in the down pour?"
ReplyDeleteI also like the way that there is a bit of a cliffhanger at the end of every paragraph.
You're right Saleha! It's a great Show not Tell sentence. How do you think the author creates a cliffhanger?
DeleteI really like the part when Zelda ducks under the lorry. To make it even better the engine is hot .That is so tense. That not my favourite. My favourite has to be the part when Zelda is safe for the no. The author must of thought about that carefully. By Amari
ReplyDeleteI really like the part when she ducks under the lorry hiding from the rain Cat but to make it even more better the engine is hot that is tense. The author must of thought carefully about that. That's not my favourite part, it has to be the ending when it said she is safe for now I really want to now what's going to happen next.
ReplyDeleteI love the ending too Amari. What do you think happens next to Zelda?
DeleteShe gets caught.
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